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I couldn't help it
in that garbage bag
dripping
yelling
“What else to do!
For the night we'll scream love.”
and you went on running through the rain
the lights
from the street lamps
and neon buildings
shimmered off the soaked cement
I could taste the grass
smell crawling through the
damp air
where your breath held still
like I had you in my arms
and you kept running
we sprung from roof top to roof top
never loosing footing
falling like the rain
stretching out my fingers
just to catch a glimpse
of your dress swaying with
that gorgeous movement ahead
you're a damn good runner
“Catch up, lover!”
you yelled it back
with that mock tone you use
the one when someone says fool things
I kept reaching
but that flower print slips
flicking rain in my eyes –
I miss the alley you turned down
meet again
my soaked city girl
©2009 ~johnfinch
:iconjohnfinch:

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:iconlestatsgirl387:
simply gorgeous

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i would bleed for lestat
:iconwanderinginthestars:
This is wonderful. (:

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"Replace my heart
'cause I'm convinced mine broke
the day I let us end."

-Justin Furstenfeld
:iconbeendown:
This is amazing..

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I dreamt you burned my fingers
Yes an automatic sting
I dreamt you called me beautiful then asked to hear me sing
I dreamt your scent invited me to crawl within your space
But then I woke up feeling nauseous
Girl, you danced around my face
:iconyourheartonmysleeve:
Wow, I can really feel it happening, can feel the emotion in it. Your amazing, never stop writing.

:D
:iconfreakyfeline:
playful :P nice work :D

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Admin of a those clubs -~sarafancrusade ~TurelClan & ~Raziel-Clan ~AbsoluteObedience

They say vertigo is not the fear to fall but the fear to jump, because deep in our darkest hearts we all have that need, the need to jump.
:iconyouinventedme:
I couldn't help it
in that garbage bag
dripping
yelling
“What else to do!
For the night we'll scream love.”

superb

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one half of ~ZombiesAteUs
:iconndean:
mindblowing

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And the pen scribbled forever more
:iconpunkrockhippie30:
I dig this one too

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music is all around us listen for it seek it out know ur welcome 2 join in dont worry about how well u carry a tune or whether u know all the words u've been invited 2 the campfire come sing along u'll have the time or ur life
:iconedon-elohim:
this is just poems?? i can't find the art

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